the shading on the main feutures of the face give it that wanted 3d effect. good choice of colours and the watercolouring effect gives the creature such beauty. the goldness in the eyes give a sharp edge very well done indeed.
the sharp lines remind me of kandinskys work years ago but is very unique to you as an artist. the spots make it somwhat different and i like the way you have used colours so she looks almost like ghost of the ocean.
the red on her face gives the impression of blood of scaring making her seem evil and the way the eyelashes give off a long wavy line brings mystery and uncertaincy and gives off a huge impact.
the makeup on her face brings a religion strongly into the picture.
nothing is overdone you have very special talent.